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Opened: Thursday, 10 February 2011, 12:20 PM
Due: Thursday, 17 February 2011, 12:20 PM

Why I don’t like plastic surgery?

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Thesis statement: Plastic surgeries have led to the decrease in human value.

Body 1: Many girls pay more attention on their look or appearance rather than their study.

Detail 1 They study about plastic surgery more than their school subject.

Detail 2 They spend money on plastic surgeries in stead of on stationery.

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Body 2: In addition, girls are highly recognized by her peers from her attractive looking.

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Body 3: Furthermore, …

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Conclusion To sum up, plastic surgeries have created poor values on young people (e. g. students)’s perception.